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I Mean to Get You Alone

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October 2, 2012
The title itself is enough to seduce you, and the impact of the writer's message drives home the idea that we have little time to love or build lasting relationships in modern day romance. I Mean to Get You Alone by ~amy-derfer
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You have sharp
pulse-elevating teeth
the stuff I imagine heart attacks
are made of

I'm bent on selling you a handful of smiles
specifically crafted
to distract you from the fact that
I have almost nothing to say

and now you're steering this conversation
in a direction that suggests you've

forgotten that I
don't watch movies or do much of
anything but work which maybe

explains why one glass of wine gets me
wrapped around you
car to streetlight
crash style
mangled limbs
breeding curious onlookers and my insurance has
expired

you're leaning in and all I can think is
I don't have insurance
I edited this a bit more, which is why I'm resubmitting it.
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HippieHebe's avatar
Oooh, modern love poem. I really enjoyed this!