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Literature Text
I require only your thoughts
laid out on a platter
of speech
before me.
The verbal version of
all your brain can
regurgitate
your skull's previously one way mirror
opened up with scalpels
leaving only raw brain before me
uncut diamonds
this simple kind of perfection
achieved only by
honest and complete sincerity
let me in
to the untrod mess that is
your mind.
laid out on a platter
of speech
before me.
The verbal version of
all your brain can
regurgitate
your skull's previously one way mirror
opened up with scalpels
leaving only raw brain before me
uncut diamonds
this simple kind of perfection
achieved only by
honest and complete sincerity
let me in
to the untrod mess that is
your mind.
© 2011 - 2024 amy-derfer
Comments3
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Simply beautiful. The imagery is fantastic and the flow of the entire poem is nearly perfect...Good job!